|Posted: 2011-January-31 at 12:17am | IP Logged
I'm most definitly not an expert, but the inside neck (the yellow part) seems to want a shadow I think the face as well could do with some shadows to make it a little less flat. But I can't tell you any more because I couldn't get my shadows correct to save my life. Ironically, that is the first thing I look for when ever i look at a picture.
BTW, is that a scanned signiture? Nice touch.