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Primordial Blob
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Posted: 2010-June-30 at 9:09pm | IP Logged Quote BS411

Hey guys if you don't know me it's because i'm new here. This is my 5th space art picture so i'm open for suggestions on how to make it better. 

And i'm still tweaking some things on it so this is probably not going to be the final version.


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Oh, and i'm sorry for the bad quality. I'm still trying to find a way to make my space art have better quality.

And here's the DeviantArt link: LINK

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Posted: 2010-July-01 at 2:00am | IP Logged Quote Milay

good work maybe better than mine when I start, or should i say now?

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Posted: 2010-July-01 at 8:31am | IP Logged Quote BS411

Milay wrote:
good work maybe better than mine when I start, or should i say now?



Haha thanks.
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Posted: 2010-July-01 at 10:51am | IP Logged Quote JanL

Hi Brandon, it's looking  pretty good so far.  You nailed the planet's  crescent and good selection for the planet's texture.  Your composition is quite good.  ---looking forward to your final rendering.  Thumbs up!  Jan 

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Posted: 2010-July-01 at 12:34pm | IP Logged Quote BS411

JanL wrote:

Hi Brandon, it's looking  pretty good so far.  You nailed the planet's  crescent and good selection for the planet's texture.  Your composition is quite good.  ---looking forward to your final rendering.  Thumbs up!  Jan 



Thanks. I'm still deciding if I should put a crater on the planet or not.
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Posted: 2010-July-01 at 2:16pm | IP Logged Quote JKelly

I think everything is great. I like your nebula, and the planet is really nice.


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Posted: 2010-July-01 at 3:13pm | IP Logged Quote BS411

I just made another version with craters on the planet. For some reason the uploading the picture wasn't working but I updated the picture on DeviantArt here.


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Posted: 2010-July-01 at 4:49pm | IP Logged Quote pogona

they look great, but too big, make them smaller.
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Posted: 2010-July-02 at 1:41am | IP Logged Quote Milay

yup smaller craters will look better cos at this size they will not look like this I think
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